Review: ‘City of Dark Magic’ by Magnus Flyte
Rating: 2 out of 5 stars
Once a city of enormous wealth and culture, Prague was home to emperors, alchemists, astronomers, and, as it’s whispered, hell portals. When music student Sarah Weston lands a summer job at Prague Castle cataloguing Beethoven’s manuscripts, she has no idea how dangerous her life is about to become. Prague is a threshold, Sarah is warned, and it is steeped in blood.
Not only does Sarah have an unnaturally sensitive nose, she also seems to have a dangerous libido. On arriving in Prague, Sarah manages to inadvertently have sex with someone whose identity remains a mystery for quite a number of pages. I would hate to disrespect women generally by using any offensive or derogatory terms and I am all for liberty but…no. And then Sarah falls in love with the “handsome Prince Max”. He is rude, uncommunicative, seemingly a bit loopy, aggressive and anti-social. Every girl’s dream, I’m sure. Not a fan of InstaLove? Sarah and Max’s relationship is about as “Insta” as it gets. One minute he’s slamming doors in her face and ignoring her, the next he’s swearing to protect her and getting arrested because of their irrepressible…connection. Why? I still don’t know.
Not all of the characters are annoying – Pollina, a young musical prodigy, is intriguing and Nico, a four-hundred year old dwarf, is cynical and managed to illicit a couple of smiles. I would also have been happy to read more about some of Sarah’s fellow academics. There is very little character development, though, and my enthusiasm about the cast is pretty lacklustre.
So that’s the main character and her love interest, what else can I criticise? Ah, yes. The plot. It was actually the plot that drew me to the novel in the first place. I *loved* the idea of a scholar of the works of Beethoven travelling to Prague to sort through sheet music in search of revelations and prepare a museum exhibit. Despite a strong start in this regard, it was disappointing when Sarah got so caught up with her “romance” that she all but abandoned her research in favour of gallivanting about with Max. The plot was scatty, at best. There were times when I was sure that I was now settled into the substantive plot and that the story would gain some traction, only to find in a few chapters that I was settling into a tangent that would abruptly be abandoned. APPARENTLY there is some link between a historic Czech family and the Golden Fleece (yes, THAT Golden Fleece) but we were too busy being dragged about town seeing the past but not being in it to really get into that particular thread. There are some attempts at rationalising and explaining the more fantastic aspects of the story but they didn’t really make any sense and involved the eating of Beethoven’s toenails so I remain unconvinced. It read a bit like a plan made under the influence of alcohol: pretty ludicrous when viewed in the light of day but seems amazing at the time of inception. I would also mention the political “intrigue” but there is only so much vitriol that I feel as though I can direct toward any one work of fiction.
I suspect that the array of loose ends are to lure me back to the series for the second “adventure”. You might have gathered that that is one release that I am by no means clamouring for.
Date finished: 07 April 2013
Source: Received from the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review – thank you, Penguin Books!
Genre: Urban fantasy/paranormal fiction
Pictured Edition Published: by Penguin Books in November 2012